letter to the PTA
kia ora PTA, I'm Emily today I'm writing to you because I think paora school should have a rock climbing wall. I think it will be a brilliant idea because it will improve your flexibility and your strength.
Why should we have a rock climbing wall at school??
having a rock climbing wall will bring people being more interested in rock climbing and you can practice your balance it will give heaps more people something fun to do. It's good for your fitness your mind, doing something new can take bad thoughts off your mind.
what uses is it to people?
There could be a person that comes in every day to do rock climbing lessons and having races to the top and back.
what will it help with?
having access to a climbing wall, and using it leads to a marked improvement of physical literacy in terms of balance, agility, and coordination. climbing is a great form of exercise with many health benefits
In conclusion, I think paroa school should have a rock climbing wall. It will put more smiles on faces l, it will give the students some new to do. It will help everyone build confidence when there climbing. Rock climbing can teach you skills in how to properly rock climb.
kia ora today we had to finish doing our letters about whatever people picked. We had to research about it and put it in our books them write it up on our blogs. I learned to never give up and never stop trying and it work I learned that do rock climbing can clear your mind.
Hey Emily, its me Ali-Jon from Glenbrae School in GI.
ReplyDeleteJust some feedback that your writing was very good but you forgot to put some capital letters in some of your words that you wrote but, I love your letter to PTA that you wanted a rock climbing wall at your school, that sounds really cool. Keep up the great work and stay safe.
Ali-Jon
hey Emily, i loved your persuasive writing maybe you could use capital letters but it was very exciting to read
ReplyDeleteHoi Emily,
ReplyDeleteIt geneieve from glenbrae school i reall like your work keep it up!
Greetings Emily
ReplyDeleteI have read your persuasive writing, it is very persuasive and it was very fun and I have learnt a lot from your writing.
Hello Emily, Victoria here from Glenbrae School. I just wanted to say that you are doing a great job and I love your persuasive writing. It is very cool to read but yeah keep up the good work and stay safe.
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